Tuesday, May 10, 2011


dancing Trees    

the trees are big and green and yellow they shine like the ocean they sway back and forth and if you listen carefully you can hear as they brush against each other


its dancing trees

by mari

2 comments:

  1. it was good but you could have wrote a little bit more than that.





    Pedro Gutierrez

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  2. You need some help on your sentence structure but other than tha, good.

    -Coltan

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