Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Kyler’s Poem

Little green umbrellas

Everlasting pokey needles

Always beautiful

Varies in shades and sizes

Ending in the cold
Starting again in the spring
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 10, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    awsome kyler. you need moreleangth to your ideas. p.s. why am i writing this from a different point of veiw?


    Kyler

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  2. AnonymousMay 10, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    that is funny



    charlie

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  3. AnonymousMay 10, 2011 at 2:49 PM

    trees end in winter not just "cold."


    -Jon k

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  4. AnonymousMay 11, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    really funny kyler DO BETTER! Chance!

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  5. AnonymousMay 11, 2011 at 2:59 PM

    Needs better sentence structure. Other than that, good.

    -Coltan

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