Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Trees

by Jasmine

Trees so beautiful to me

Really green and as tall as the moon in the sky

Evergreen with branches falling like stars

Enclosed in bark

Shade and the home to bees and wildlife
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 11, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    You need a comma after trees in the first stanza. In general, it was a good blog!

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  2. AnonymousMay 11, 2011 at 2:59 PM

    I like the way you compare trees and things in space. Many great details in that acrostic poem. -Nayeli :)

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  3. AnonymousMay 11, 2011 at 2:59 PM

    This poem is very good! I love how you describe the tree, oh and thanks for the correction, whoever that was!
    - Jasmine

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